ati uttam bhavon ka udgam.. khodasi nayika ka yeh varnan . patjhar ke mausam meyn dikhta sundar madir salona upvan. is upvan ke ful bus dekho. chnunah unnehe param varjit hai. sundarta dekhney ki hoti asparsan gharsan bhi varjit...
meri shubh kamnayen ...achha likha hai. vishnukant
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ati uttam bhavon ka udgam..
khodasi nayika ka yeh varnan .
patjhar ke mausam meyn dikhta
sundar madir salona upvan.
is upvan ke ful bus dekho.
chnunah unnehe param varjit hai.
sundarta dekhney ki hoti
asparsan gharsan bhi varjit...
meri shubh kamnayen ...achha likha hai.
vishnukant
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